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We have gotten so attached to these days and these months,
but a deer doesn't know a Tuesday from a Thursday
and a caribou can't  comprehend that it was born on a September afternoon,
but they can understand this instant, this moment, this breath,
only now, no longer the past, and only the future when they get there,

there's a healthy lack of awareness in that,
escaping the fear of death but thriving off the instinct to live,
everything so primal and based off gut reactions,
I guess you could say ignorance is bliss,
but ignorance only actually applies when it comes to humanity,
oh I would like a life like that,

one that is organic, tangible, and ripe with bloody berries,
one where carnal creatures run rampant,
one where we rise from the dirt with muddy thighs
because we were bred into these earthly bodies
to hold seconds in our palms like newborn children,
and to throw our heads back and howl against the awareness that we are dying,

for oh this skin is only our host,
we derive from stardust that was ever so fated,
our hearts are made up of astrological waste,
and we trick ourselves into saying we don't believe in anything but nothing,
but nothing is something too
and maybe nothing is the most important thing of all,

our language and our tongues have chosen to deceive us
because these words we've created limit the ways in which we think,
now what if nothing was defined as God and God was defined as nothing,
so if you believed in nothing you believed in God and if you believed in God you believed in nothing,
we are constricted by these beliefs that are so separate from faith and that distract from really living,

and I want to feel alive and unbound,
I want to embrace a life without words
and fall into a world painted lavishly with love and coincidence,
I want to run with bare feet on Saturn's surface,
although in my mind Saturn is the sun
and I will always be the moon.

This just poured out of me tonight, I have been having a lot of different emotions run through me over these last couple of days and I just feel like focusing on living in the moment is what really matters and I learned that from my grandpa who I love and miss.
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Aatlein Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful :rose:
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Aatlein Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
most welcome :rose:
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0hgravity Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
such beautiful and wise words here. a kind of poem that makes one think but also makes one wonder.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this :)
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:iconblackdahlia911:
oh thank you so much! :heart: I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the watch as well!!!
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0hgravity Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)
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scribblingnooly Aug 13, 2012  Professional
Just been reading the poems Mrs-Freestar-Bul posted and it led me to read this. I love the theme and wisdom in this poem. Absolutely brilliant! :-)
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:iconblackdahlia911:
thank you so much :heart: that means a lot! i'm so glad you enjoyed it :)
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scribblingnooly Aug 19, 2012  Professional
You're welcome :-)
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successwithhonor Jul 26, 2012  Student Writer
"and we trick ourselves into saying we don't believe in anything but nothing,
but nothing is something too
and maybe nothing is the most important thing of all"

a simply brilliant stream-of-conscious-like poem that reflects our innate desires to be free and wild
and one's attempt to debate life from a new perspective.
beautiful work!
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