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Once there was a young girl who believed in three things: breathing, dying, and true love. Three basic things, that shouldn't be too difficult. What she didn't realize was that they are all intertwined. We breathe to escape death, while we also breathe to die. Then true love gives us breath, but true love lost causes us to die even slower and painfully so. No, she did not know it then but she most certainly does now; for she has breathed and loved and died all at once and then altogether. Inhaling only to exhale, breathing only to love, and loving only to die.
a short little piece of prose on a Sunday night, feels just right
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Sigma-Echo-Seven Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Writer
Very clever. Well done!
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WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
All of your poetry is so gorgeous. I'm just in awe. O_O
haha. definitely a deviant watch.
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blackdahlia911 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
You have made my day, thank you so much for the watch and all of the wonderful comments :heart: it means a lot
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WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha you're welcome. :)
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SoraIsMyHomeboy Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is so beautiful and thought-provoking. the ending is so powerful and worded perfectly
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blackdahlia911 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
Thank you, I'm so glad you like it!!!
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ginqueeen Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Student General Artist
it is just perfect
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blackdahlia911 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
Wow! Thank you :heart:
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ginqueeen Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Student General Artist
:)Because it is a summary of what I believe in too.
No worries. Your writing is super captivating. Good luck.
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