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Tell me you love me
the way you love the sky when it rains.
Would that be a lie?
Yes.
Then move on, move away,
let my clouds thunder
and my blood pour,
I am sick of this weather
but I'm even more sick of you;
diseased with a molding horizon
dancing along my hips,
I am ready for winter
so let it snow, bitch.
this feels different to me
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Sigma-Echo-Seven Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Writer
My reaction to this poem: :icondatassplz:

Great impact!
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blackdahlia911 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
Haha thanks! That little picture made me laugh XD
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WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The last line made me laugh and definitely caught me by surprise. :)
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blackdahlia911 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
haha thanks :)
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LuXun1986 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE this . It's so simple, short and powerful. :thumbsup:
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blackdahlia911 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
Ahh thank you so much :heart: :heart:
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LuXun1986 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure. :pat:
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This made me lol... Because that's about where I am. Lovely.
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blackdahlia911 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
Thanks! Haha I'm glad you can relate :heart:
I don't normally write endings like this but it just kind of felt right here lol
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, it totally fits! It was so unexpected it just made me spit-laugh all over the laptop. I loved it XD
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