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That red dress flowing at her ankles like blood,
rippling against her river thin frame of fire,
she is burning, burning so bloody,
she sweats and she cries and she falls to the ground,
but her eyes dance in the flickering flames
and her heart skips when his voice catches on her pastry flake flesh,
his voice lingers there, rests, soul upon skin, sin upon sin,
her body cooked tender.
:iconblackdahlia911:
I don't know where this came from. It just came to my mind and I wrote.
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~CelestialMemories Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Always the most random of thoughts can flow into something so transfixing as this piece. You did an amazing job. :star:
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~CelestialMemories Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are always welcome ^_^
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:iconikingfisher:
"I don't know where this came from. It just came to my mind and I wrote."

Clearly it came from your mind! Never question inspiration, that's what makes it inspiration; There is a reason the muse has always been seen as a separate entity from the artist themselves.

As for the work itself I really like the imagery, it's a fine line you walk between symbolism and literalism and it really comes across well; the entire piece feels like it could have a strong double or even triple meaning which adds to the emotional impact allowing the reader to impart whatever they wish upon the words
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:iconblackdahlia911:
Haha I definitely agree, never question inspiration!
And thank you! That is such an amazing compliment :heart:
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:iconikingfisher:
It's all true ^^
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