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It's searching fingertips,
gingerly placed empty spaces,
and wrong timing,

but now it's I love you, oh wait I really do,
please don't leave me under these carnival lights alone
because I can't bare another day without your syrup sweet blood,

you are the sugar in my coffee
and the honey on my toast,
the candy rotting my teeth,
and the molasses thick air I inhale on summer nights.
sometimes people sneak up on you
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rebelnijamaster Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Student Writer
I really like the second stanza the best, I think. Especially the second line of that stanza.
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blackdahlia911 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012
thank you! :heart:
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