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trembling lips,
can't breathe, at least not steadily,
paint me turquoise
or be the forest to my fire,
actually I'd rather you were nothing, at least nothing to me,
now I can feel nightfall coming upon the manifestation of a July moon,
so let's let those clouds burst and rip wide open
just as though the clouds were my organs and
the rain were my blood.

i like rain
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xKDawnx Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Took my breath away.
Sometimes I don't know how to comment on raw emotion like this.
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blackdahlia911 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
Thank you! I wrote this last night when I was exhausted and just letting my subconscious say whatever it felt like haha
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